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2019年11月23日 03:59

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【<】【p】【>】【它】【不】【争】【荣】【夺】【慕】【,】【在】【<】【u】【>】【作】【文】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【w】【w】【w】【.】【z】【u】【o】【w】【e】【n】【8】【.】【c】【o】【m】【<】【/】【u】【>】【争】【妍】【斗】【丽】【、】【喷】【芳】【吐】【香】【的】【花】【丛】【前】【,】【它】【另】【选】【僻】【境】【,】【在】【远】【离】【花】【丛】【的】【河】【塘】【展】【示】【着】【自】【己】【。】【高】【洁】【而】【又】【朴】【实】【的】【荷】【花】【,】【让】【我】【学】【会】【了】【高】【洁】【;】【它】【默】【默】【地】【为】【人】【们】【带】【来】【的】【清】【新】【美】【感】【和】【诸】【多】【果】【实】【,】【让】【我】【懂】【得】【了】【什】【么】【是】【无】【私】【奉】【献】【。】【顽】【强】【的】【野】【草】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【野】【火】【烧】【不】【尽】【,】【春】【风】【吹】【又】【生】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【的】【野】【草】【,】【它】【的】【根】【深】【深】【地】【扎】【进】【土】【里】【,】【伸】【向】【四】【面】【八】【方】【,】【可】【谓】【是】【根】【深】【蒂】【固】【,】【脚】【踏】【实】【地】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】发型网【<】【p】【>】【我】【意】【味】【深】【长】【地】【点】【点】【头】【,】【理】【直】【气】【壮】【地】【告】【诉】【爸】【爸】【,】【下】【次】【我】【一】【定】【会】【考】【好】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【就】【像】【手】【中】【的】【流】【沙】【,】【随】【着】【风】【从】【指】【缝】【间】【渐】【渐】【流】【失】【…】【…】【五】【年】【级】【的】【最】【后】【一】【个】【小】【学】【暑】【假】【,】【妈】【妈】【告】【诉】【我】【,】【我】【们】【马】【上】【就】【要】【离】【开】【这】【个】【生】【活】【了】【十】【几】【年】【的】【地】【方】【,】【去】【市】【区】【读】【初】【中】【了】【。】【我】【听】【了】【之】【后】【,】【感】【觉】【心】【里】【空】【荡】【荡】【的】【,】【仿】【佛】【一】【下】【子】【失】【去】【了】【很】【重】【要】【的】【东】【西】【。】【在】【整】【理】【书】【本】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【想】【再】【去】【看】【看】【这】【个】【曾】【经】【与】【我】【朝】【夕】【相】【处】【的】【小】【区】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【区】【里】【常】【见】【的】【人】【大】【都】【是】【老】【爷】【爷】【和】【老】【奶】【奶】【,】【平】【时】【的】【小】【区】【是】【安】【适】【恬】【静】【的】【。】【站】【在】【树】【荫】【下】【的】【小】【路】【上】【,】【我】【闭】【上】【眼】【睛】【,】【倾】【听】【着】【风】【吹】【树】【叶】【的】【声】【音】【。】【“】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【”】【,】【这】【声】【音】【有】【让】【人】【放】【松】【心】【情】【的】【力】【量】【,】【以】【前】【我】【也】【总】【是】【喜】【欢】【这】【样】【听】【着】【。】【“】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【”】【,】【隔】【壁】【奶】【奶】【的】【叫】【声】【打】【断】【了】【我】【的】【思】【绪】【。】【我】【微】【笑】【着】【走】【过】【去】【,】【挪】【动】【一】【只】【小】【凳】【子】【坐】【在】【她】【的】【旁】【边】【。】【她】【知】【道】【我】【就】【要】【离】【开】【这】【里】【,】【像】【是】【叮】【嘱】【自】【己】【的】【孙】【女】【一】【样】【“】【唠】【叨】【”】【着】【。】【虽】【然】【喋】【喋】【不】【休】【的】【,】【却】【让】【我】【感】【到】【很】【温】【暖】【。】【突】【然】【,】【一】【排】【小】【蚂】【蚁】【排】【着】【整】【齐】【的】【队】【伍】【出】【现】【在】【我】【的】【面】【前】【。】【他】【们】【齐】【心】【协】【力】【地】【搬】【动】【着】【一】【块】【小】【小】【的】【食】【物】【碎】【屑】【。】【碎】【屑】【在】【地】【上】【“】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【”】【地】【移】【动】【着】【。】【小】【时】【候】【的】【一】【幕】【幕】【浮】【现】【在】【我】【的】【眼】【前】【。】【奶】【奶】【们】【聊】【天】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【总】【是】【喜】【欢】【和】【这】【些】【“】【搬】【运】【工】【”】【们】【玩】【,】【有】【时】【用】【脚】【挡】【住】【它】【们】【的】【去】【路】【,】【有】【时】【用】【叶】【片】【或】【者】【小】【石】【头】【堵】【住】【它】【们】【的】【洞】【口】【。】【这】【些】【小】【家】【伙】【在】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【中】【成】【了】【我】【儿】【时】【的】【玩】【伴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【继】【续】【向】【前】【走】【。】【“】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【”】【,】【邮】【递】【员】【叔】【叔】【的】【脚】【踏】【车】【轻】【快】【地】【叫】【着】【。】【看】【了】【看】【手】【表】【,】【原】【来】【已】【经】【到】【邮】【递】【员】【叔】【叔】【送】【晚】【报】【的】【时】【候】【。】【记】【得】【我】【以】【前】【总】【是】【喜】【欢】【站】【在】【他】【们】【身】【旁】【看】【着】【他】【们】【把】【报】【纸】【送】【到】【信】【箱】【里】【,】【等】【到】【他】【们】【塞】【到】【我】【家】【的】【信】【箱】【时】【,】【我】【便】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【地】【把】【它】【取】【出】【来】【。】【时】【间】【久】【了】【,】【他】【们】【看】【见】【我】【总】【是】【友】【好】【地】【说】【上】【两】【句】【,】【把】【我】【家】【的】【报】【纸】【直】【接】【递】【给】【我】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【”】【“】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【”】【“】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【”】【“】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【”】【,】【这】【些】【声】【音】【共】【同】【汇】【成】【最】【美】【的】【声】【音】【—】【—】【“】【故】【乡】【”】【的】【声】【音】【。】【现】【在】【的】【我】【已】【经】【不】【住】【在】【那】【里】【了】【,】【但】【打】【开】【窗】【户】【闭】【上】【眼】【睛】【用】【心】【倾】【听】【,】【儿】【时】【的】【一】【幕】【幕】【回】【忆】【便】【又】【会】【浮】【现】【在】【我】【的】【眼】【前】【,】【陪】【伴】【我】【度】【过】【独】【处】【的】【时】【刻】【,】【让】【我】【不】【会】【孤】【单】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【用】【心】【去】【倾】【听】【吧】【!】【我】【感】【到】【这】【世】【上】【的】【点】【点】【滴】【滴】【都】【是】【最】【美】【的】【声】【音】【!】【包】【括】【那】【远】【去】【的】【“】【故】【乡】【”】【的】【声】【音】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【用】【心】【去】【感】【受】【生】【活】【,】【又】【用】【形】【象】【的】【语】【言】【把】【这】【种】【感】【受】【真】【切】【地】【表】【达】【出】【来】【,】【是】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【动】【人】【之】【处】【。】【只】【有】【失】【去】【才】【懂】【得】【拥】【有】【的】【珍】【贵】【。】【绿】【树】【清】【风】【,】【老】【人】【叮】【嘱】【,】【蚂】【蚁】【搬】【家】【,】【邮】【差】【送】【报】【,】【这】【些】【都】【是】【日】【常】【生】【活】【景】【象】【,】【却】【浸】【润】【着】【邻】【里】【亲】【情】【,】【构】【建】【了】【作】【者】【幸】【福】【的】【童】【年】【生】【活】【。】【告】【别】【小】【区】【,】【告】【别】【邻】【里】【,】【也】【即】【告】【别】【童】【年】【,】【所】【以】【临】【别】【之】【际】【,】【作】【者】【才】【会】【如】【此】【依】【依】【不】【舍】【。】【珍】【惜】【之】【意】【,】【感】【恩】【之】【情】【,】【流】【溢】【于】【字】【里】【行】【间】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【以】【富】【有】【特】【色】【的】【声】【音】【“】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【”】【“】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【”】【“】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【”】【“】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【”】【穿】【起】【一】【幕】【幕】【生】【活】【场】【景】【,】【选】【材】【恰】【当】【,】【结】【构】【清】【晰】【,】【用】【心】【之】【处】【,】【值】【得】【称】【许】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【用】【心】【去】【倾】【听】【吧】【!】【我】【感】【到】【这】【世】【上】【的】【点】【点】【滴】【滴】【都】【是】【最】【美】【的】【声】【音】【!】【包】【括】【那】【远】【去】【的】【‘】【故】【乡】【’】【的】【声】【音】【。】【”】【“】【倾】【听】【”】【是】【感】【受】【,】【“】【用】【心】【”】【是】【体】【验】【,】【“】【最】【美】【”】【是】【悟】【得】【。】【其】【中】【小】【小】【少】【年】【能】【做】【到】【“】【用】【心】【”】【,】【最】【为】【难】【得】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【郑】【重】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】发型网【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【总】【说】【我】【们】【这】【一】【代】【的】【孩】【子】【很】【可】【怜】【,】【不】【会】【玩】【,】【不】【会】【乐】【,】【不】【像】【他】【们】【那】【会】【儿】【,】【一】【身】【土】【却】【快】【乐】【幸】【福】【得】【不】【得】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【是】【地】【地】【道】【道】【的】【农】【民】【,】【虽】【说】【进】【城】【当】【国】【家】【干】【部】【也】【十】【几】【年】【了】【,】【可】【父】【亲】【仍】【乐】【意】【并】【保】【持】【着】【在】【农】【村】【时】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【,】【在】【儿】【时】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【:】【避】【开】【尘】【嚣】【,】【追】【求】【最】【自】【然】【的】【本】【质】【。】【因】【而】【父】【亲】【总】【在】【家】【乡】【饭】【、】【农】【村】【、】【农】【民】【上】【找】【到】【自】【己】【的】【快】【乐】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【不】【喜】【欢】【吃】【山】【珍】【海】【味】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【吃】【上】【千】【元】【的】【大】【宴】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【正】【儿】【八】【经】【地】【坐】【在】【茶】【楼】【里】【品】【茶】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【扎】【着】【领】【带】【穿】【着】【西】【装】【陪】【人】【喝】【酒】【。】【父】【亲】【说】【,】【这】【样】【的】【生】【活】【总】【不】【是】【个】【味】【儿】【,】【其】【实】【一】【点】【也】【不】【快】【乐】【。】【父】【亲】【喜】【欢】【吃】【大】【碗】【大】【碗】【的】【面】【汤】【,】【喜】【欢】【吃】【煎】【饼】【卷】【大】【葱】【…】【…】【母】【亲】【总】【说】【父】【亲】【很】【土】【不】【会】【享】【受】【,】【可】【父】【亲】【说】【过】【着】【农】【民】【般】【的】【日】【子】【,】【就】【是】【他】【最】【大】【的】【快】【乐】【和】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【就】【是】【父】【亲】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【,】【追】【求】【的】【不】【在】【于】【所】【谓】【的】【品】【质】【,】【而】【在】【于】【回】【忆】【中】【的】【那】【份】【快】【乐】【幸】【福】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【不】【喜】【欢】【坐】【高】【级】【的】【小】【轿】【车】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【整】【天】【坐】【在】【电】【脑】【电】【视】【前】【无】【休】【止】【地】【娱】【乐】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【躺】【在】【按】【摩】【椅】【上】【舒】【服】【地】【看】【报】【纸】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【扎】【堆】【儿】【没】【完】【地】【闲】【聊】【。】【父】【亲】【说】【,】【这】【样】【的】【生】【活】【看】【似】【悠】【闲】【,】【其】【实】【并】【不】【自】【在】【,】【谈】【不】【上】【快】【乐】【幸】【福】【。】【父】【亲】【喜】【欢】【在】【周】【末】【自】【己】【骑】【上】【摩】【托】【车】【到】【郊】【区】【的】【田】【间】【地】【头】【走】【一】【走】【,】【爬】【上】【小】【小】【的】【土】【堆】【,】【用】【帽】【子】【盖】【在】【脸】【上】【先】【舒】【坦】【地】【睡】【个】【午】【觉】【,】【随】【后】【望】【着】【无】【际】【的】【麦】【田】【自】【在】【地】【哼】【上】【一】【曲】【,】【到】【处】【走】【走】【,】【到】【处】【看】【看】【。】【有】【一】【次】【,】【父】【亲】【受】【邀】【尝】【到】【了】【刚】【摘】【下】【的】【新】【鲜】【柿】【子】【,】【回】【家】【乐】【和】【了】【一】【晚】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【就】【是】【父】【亲】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【,】【不】【追】【求】【所】【谓】【的】【情】【调】【,】【只】【聪】【明】【地】【在】【大】【自】【然】【中】【汲】【取】【快】【乐】【幸】【福】【!】【父】【亲】【不】【喜】【欢】【冠】【冕】【堂】【皇】【的】【客】【套】【话】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【钩】【心】【斗】【角】【的】【为】【官】【之】【道】【,】【不】【喜】【欢】【虚】【情】【假】【意】【地】【迎】【来】【送】【往】【。】【父】【亲】【说】【,】【这】【样】【的】【生】【活】【在】【有】【些】【人】【看】【来】【也】【许】【挺】【风】【光】【,】【可】【那】【是】【个】【空】【壳】【,】【一】【点】【也】【不】【快】【乐】【。】【父】【亲】【喜】【欢】【和】【农】【民】【打】【交】【道】【,】【高】【兴】【和】【家】【门】【口】【炸】【油】【条】【的】【聊】【聊】【地】【里】【的】【庄】【稼】【,】【乐】【意】【从】【车】【上】【下】【来】【帮】【老】【汉】【推】【上】【一】【截】【子】【架】【子】【车】【。】【周】【末】【到】【农】【民】【家】【坐】【炕】【沿】【儿】【上】【吃】【碗】【汤】【面】【条】【儿】【更】【是】【常】【有】【的】【事】【,】【叫】【几】【个】【农】【民】【朋】【友】【到】【家】【里】【美】【美】【喝】【上】【几】【杯】【,】【也】【能】【让】【父】【亲】【高】【兴】【好】【几】【天】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【就】【是】【父】【亲】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【,】【不】【追】【求】【所】【谓】【风】【光】【,】【只】【在】【跟】【农】【民】【最】【朴】【实】【的】【交】【谈】【中】【快】【乐】【着】【,】【幸】【福】【着】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【有】【着】【最】【朴】【实】【自】【然】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【,】【因】【而】【才】【有】【了】【自】【己】【最】【舒】【心】【的】【快】【乐】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【亓】【海】【燕】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【写】【了】【新】【老】【两】【代】【人】【不】【同】【的】【人】【生】【追】【求】【,】【不】【同】【的】【思】【维】【方】【式】【,】【反】【映】【了】【社】【会】【转】【型】【时】【期】【人】【们】【价】【值】【观】【正】【在】【急】【剧】【而】【深】【刻】【的】【发】【生】【变】【化】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【父】【亲】【很】【“】【土】【”】【,】【但】【在】【父】【亲】【眼】【里】【,】【那】【些】【追】【求】【“】【洋】【”】【的】【“】【我】【们】【”】【很】【可】【怜】【。】【为】【什】【么】【可】【怜】【?】【因】【为】【我】【们】【把】【人】【的】【最】【重】【要】【最】【本】【色】【的】【品】【质】【—】【—】【淳】【朴】【丢】【了】【。】【淳】【朴】【,】【体】【现】【在】【人】【对】【大】【自】【然】【的】【崇】【敬】【,】【体】【现】【在】【人】【与】【自】【然】【的】【和】【谐】【相】【处】【,】【体】【现】【在】【人】【与】【人】【之】【间】【的】【真】【诚】【友】【爱】【相】【互】【帮】【助】【。】【我】【们】【的】【社】【会】【应】【该】【呼】【唤】【这】【种】【情】【感】【的】【回】【归】【。】【当】【我】【们】【坐】【在】【电】【脑】【、】【电】【视】【前】【消】【磨】【时】【光】【时】【,】【我】【们】【已】【远】【离】【了】【健】【康】【;】【当】【我】【们】【热】【衷】【于】【吃】【山】【珍】【海】【味】【时】【,】【一】【些】【珍】【稀】【动】【物】【在】【逐】【渐】【消】【失】【;】【当】【我】【们】【习】【惯】【于】【冠】【冕】【堂】【皇】【的】【客】【套】【话】【时】【,】【诚】【信】【的】【品】【德】【却】【再】【难】【寻】【觅】【,】【文】【章】【以】【恬】【淡】【之】【笔】【,】【道】【出】【了】【一】【个】【真】【理】【,】【值】【得】【每】【个】【读】【者】【深】【思】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【点】【评】【老】【师】【:】【甫】【田】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【知】【识】【卡】【片】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【柳】【宗】【元】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【唐】【代】【文】【学】【家】【、】【哲】【学】【家】【。】【字】【子】【厚】【,】【世】【称】【“】【柳】【河】【东】【”】【、】【“】【柳】【柳】【州】【”】【。】【与】【韩】【愈】【、】【欧】【阳】【修】【、】【苏】【洵】【、】【苏】【轼】【、】【苏】【辙】【、】【王】【安】【石】【、】【曾】【巩】【并】【称】【为】【唐】【宋】【最】【杰】【出】【的】【散】【文】【“】【八】【大】【家】【”】【。】【 】【因】【倡】【导】【古】【文】【运】【动】【,】【与】【韩】【愈】【并】【称】【“】【韩】【柳】【”】【。】【他】【的】【《】【捕】【蛇】【者】【说】【》】【深】【刻】【揭】【露】【了】【社】【会】【矛】【盾】【,】【批】【判】【时】【政】【,】【尖】【锐】【有】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【试】【题】【导】【入】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【的】【家】【乡】【每】【天】【都】【在】【变】【化】【着】【,】【城】【市】【在】【变】【化】【,】【农】【村】【在】【变】【化】【,】【人】【们】【的】【生】【活】【在】【变】【化】【。】【楼】【房】【越】【来】【越】【多】【,】【房】【屋】【越】【来】【越】【亮】【堂】【,】【道】【路】【越】【来】【越】【宽】【,】【路】【边】【绿】【化】【也】【越】【来】【越】【美】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【们】【在】【追】【求】【物】【质】【生】【活】【的】【同】【时】【,】【对】【精】【神】【生】【活】【也】【有】【了】【新】【的】【追】【求】【。】【衣】【食】【无】【忧】【的】【人】【们】【开】【始】【关】【注】【外】【面】【的】【世】【界】【,】【关】【注】【中】【国】【的】【经】【济】【发】【展】【,】【关】【注】【世】【界】【的】【热】【点】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【留】【心】【身】【边】【的】【这】【种】【变】【化】【了】【吗】【?】【细】【致】【观】【察】【并】【深】【切】【感】【受】【你】【身】【边】【的】【这】【种】【变】【化】【,】【用】【生】【动】【的】【文】【笔】【描】【绘】【你】【的】【所】【察】【所】【思】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【“】【家】【乡】【新】【变】【化】【”】【为】【话】【题】【写】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【文】【体】【不】【限】【,】【题】【目】【自】【拟】【,】【6】【0】【0】【字】【以】【上】【。】【要】【写】【出】【真】【感】【受】【、】【真】【变】【化】【,】【既】【可】【写】【事】【物】【,】【又】【可】【写】【人】【物】【,】【切】【忌】【泛】【泛】【而】【谈】【,】【空】【洞】【乏】【味】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【作】【指】【导】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【描】【写】【家】【乡】【的】【新】【变】【化】【,】【必】【须】【细】【致】【观】【察】【并】【深】【切】【感】【受】【这】【种】【变】【化】【:】【感】【受】【社】【会】【现】【象】【的】【变】【化】【,】【感】【受】【发】【展】【动】【力】【的】【变】【化】【;】【感】【受】【物】【质】【生】【活】【的】【变】【化】【,】【感】【受】【精】【神】【世】【界】【的】【变】【化】【。】【比】【如】【乡】【村】【的】【城】【镇】【化】【,】【农】【业】【的】【现】【代】【化】【,】【手】【机】【的】【普】【及】【化】【,】【衣】【着】【的】【时】【尚】【化】【,】【轿】【车】【的】【家】【庭】【化】【,】【城】【市】【的】【园】【林】【化】【,】【街】【道】【的】【宽】【敞】【化】【,】【建】【筑】【的】【个】【性】【化】【,】【饮】【食】【的】【营】【养】【化】【,】【科】【技】【的】【尖】【端】【化】【,】【精】【神】【的】【多】【彩】【化】【…】【…】【要】【把】【握】【自】【己】【最】【感】【兴】【趣】【的】【一】【点】【,】【积】【累】【感】【受】【和】【灵】【感】【,】【有】【话】【可】【说】【,】【以】【小】【见】【大】【,】【能】【感】【染】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【变】【化】【,】【就】【要】【注】【重】【写】【今】【昔】【的】【对】【比】【。】【既】【可】【写】【人】【物】【、】【事】【物】【的】【变】【化】【,】【又】【可】【写】【景】【物】【的】【变】【化】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【妹】【妹】【乐】【了】【:】【“】【电】【脑】【归】【我】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【忙】【说】【:】【“】【是】【为】【了】【你】【和】【你】【姐】【姐】【的】【学】【习】【买】【的】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奶】【奶】【一】【听】【笑】【了】【,】【妈】【妈】【笑】【了】【。】【我】【和】【妹】【妹】【也】【笑】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【候】【,】【妹】【妹】【调】【换】【了】【频】【道】【,】【电】【视】【里】【播】【放】【的】【是】【奶】【奶】【最】【爱】【看】【的】【戏】【—】【—】【“】【咿】【呀】【咿】【呀】【咿】【咿】【呀】【呀】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【围】【绕】【家】【庭】【关】【于】【电】【视】【的】【话】【题】【,】【单】【刀】【直】【入】【,】【如】【数】【家】【珍】【,】【曲】【折】【细】【腻】【,】【摇】【曳】【多】【姿】【,】【巧】【忆】【往】【事】【,】【今】【昔】【对】【比】【,】【反】【映】【了】【百】【姓】【生】【活】【水】【平】【的】【不】【断】【提】【高】【,】【折】【射】【了】【时】【代】【的】【巨】【大】【变】【化】【,】【以】【小】【见】【大】【,】【意】【旨】【深】【切】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【通】【篇】【以】【人】【物】【对】【话】【而】【制】【胜】【。】【对】【话】【富】【有】【浓】【郁】【的】【生】【活】【气】【息】【,】【个】【性】【鲜】【明】【。】【特】【别】【是】【奶】【奶】【的】【话】【,】【别】【有】【情】【趣】【。】【文】【章】【结】【构】【简】【明】【自】【然】【,】【一】【气】【呵】【成】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【心】【练】【笔】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【“】【身】【边】【的】【变】【化】【”】【为】【题】【,】【写】【一】【个】【作】【文】【片】【段】【,】【要】【运】【用】【细】【节】【描】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【法】【点】【拨】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【事】【物】【的】【变】【化】【过】【程】【,】【可】【运】【用】【场】【面】【描】【写】【或】【景】【物】【描】【写】【;】【写】【人】【物】【的】【变】【化】【,】【可】【灵】【活】【运】【用】【语】【言】【描】【写】【和】【行】【动】【描】【写】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【积】【累】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【一】【年】【没】【回】【家】【了】【。】【走】【在】【家】【乡】【熟】【悉】【的】【街】【道】【上】【,】【我】【却】【有】【了】【一】【种】【陌】【生】【感】【。】【不】【少】【人】【家】【新】【盖】【了】【二】【层】【小】【楼】【,】【弄】【不】【清】【到】【底】【是】【谁】【家】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奶】【奶】【见】【了】【我】【高】【兴】【地】【合】【不】【拢】【嘴】【:】【“】【妮】【子】【,】【我】【让】【你】【饱】【一】【饱】【口】【福】【。】【”】【等】【饭】【菜】【端】【上】【来】【,】【我】【愣】【了】【:】【“】【奶】【奶】【,】【我】【还】【以】【为】【你】【给】【我】【做】【了】【大】【鱼】【大】【肉】【呢】【…】【…】【”】【奶】【奶】【做】【个】【鬼】【脸】【:】【“】【傻】【妮】【子】【,】【这】【年】【头】【大】【鱼】【大】【肉】【都】【吃】【腻】【了】【,】【有】【啥】【好】【吃】【的】【?】【现】【在】【电】【视】【里】【说】【要】【吃】【绿】【色】【,】【吃】【营】【养】【。】【你】【看】【,】【这】【饭】【菜】【你】【不】【愿】【吃】【啊】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【饭】【桌】【上】【摆】【上】【了】【奶】【奶】【亲】【手】【酿】【的】【面】【酱】【,】【还】【有】【大】【葱】【,】【曲】【曲】【菜】【、】【婆】【婆】【丁】【等】【别】【有】【药】【效】【的】【野】【菜】【,】【香】【喷】【喷】【的】【窝】【窝】【头】【。】【外】【加】【一】【大】【盆】【紫】【菜】【鸡】【蛋】【汤】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【于】【是】【埋】【头】【吃】【了】【个】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【。】【心】【里】【直】【感】【叹】【连】【老】【人】【的】【饮】【食】【观】【念】【都】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【了】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】发型网【<】【p】【>】【春】【,】【悄】【然】【而】【至】【,】【大】【地】【复】【苏】【,】【到】【处】【一】【派】【生】【机】【盎】【然】【。】【来】【来】【往】【往】【的】【人】【们】【都】【钟】【情】【于】【四】【周】【的】【争】【奇】【斗】【艳】【,】【姹】【紫】【嫣】【红】【,】【很】【少】【有】【人】【会】【注】【意】【到】【杨】【柳】【抽】【芽】【了】【,】【嫩】【绿】【嫩】【绿】【的】【默】【默】【不】【言】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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